Allyson, The content of your elevator pitch was really outstanding. I like how you took your time explaining the concept of your holder and the idea came across clearly and concisely. One thing I will say is that you did seem to lack enthusiasm and projection in your voice. I would try to be louder and more excited about the idea; you want your investors to be excited too! Keep up the good work!
Allyson,
ReplyDeleteThe content of your elevator pitch was really outstanding. I like how you took your time explaining the concept of your holder and the idea came across clearly and concisely. One thing I will say is that you did seem to lack enthusiasm and projection in your voice. I would try to be louder and more excited about the idea; you want your investors to be excited too! Keep up the good work!